Another good effort. Better than the first. A much smoother read than the first. A very good job. I'm beginning to think this series can become really very good. I look forward to part 3.
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Anonymous09/09/04
so much potential!! still good tho
your stories are on the verge of something fantastic, seems like they just need a little more time put into them. STill tho, they do get me hot. hope see more from u!
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Anonymous09/11/04
wow
this was a great story and it would be awful if u didnt continue it. u are such a great writer.
sammy
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Anonymous09/12/04
wanting more
all of your stories are very good...ur facination with big tits ...fu.... love it
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Anonymous12/14/07
Black men don't speak that way
First off Black men do not refer to their cock as with all the adjectives you used. Black men do not refer to a female sex organs as a cunt. White female are normally offend by the use of this word also.
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Another good effort. Better than the first. A much smoother read than the first. A very good job. I'm beginning to think this series can become really very good. I look forward to part 3.
so much potential!! still good tho
your stories are on the verge of something fantastic, seems like they just need a little more time put into them. STill tho, they do get me hot. hope see more from u!
wow
this was a great story and it would be awful if u didnt continue it. u are such a great writer.
sammy
wanting more
all of your stories are very good...ur facination with big tits ...fu.... love it
Black men don't speak that way
First off Black men do not refer to their cock as with all the adjectives you used. Black men do not refer to a female sex organs as a cunt. White female are normally offend by the use of this word also.
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