All Comments on 'Lisa and I'

Hope you write a part 2. They need to continue the story and actually fall in love. Enjoyed the first part.

I though it was a good start, u can learn a lot in just 10 days, I got into this except the last page when she invited mark to watch, then I skipped that part, hope the 2 girls do get together

I thought to myself, gosh that was a good story.

Realism contributes a lot to eroticism. This story is not a filthy off the wall fantasy, but totally believable. Thanks for the good work!!!

I still enjoy reading this story I wrote a couple of years ago. It was different writing a story about 2 women, and 2 women playing with the lucky boy. I found myself dripping pre-cum again, like I did the first time I wrote this.