by average gina
you seem like you have so much pain and all you ask for is someone to love you for who your are and i hope you find that.
I enjoy your writing very much. its clever but unpretencious. Witty and charming.
Thanks gina
Makes me have a quite different picture if you and see into your soul. I love what I see.
Made tears come into my eyes and I did think about it long after I finished reading it.
Your friend
lovegirl
I really liked it. Think it would be great to hear it read out loud, but I wasn't going to do that here on my own.
You truly have a way of describing things Gina that makes one feel what you're saying.
Keep up the good work!
Gina ... thank you for sharing this ... my heart aches in response, in memory, and in empathy - for you, for me, for all those I love who find themselves so fraught. Your heart may be many things, but empty I do not sense. I love your sense of timing and balance. I look forward to reading more of you ...
Green
Gina you keep getting better n' better. This is the lady's anthem, with mixed emotions and weakness. The question every woman wants to know "why do you tease my empty heart"? What's up wit that? LoL!
Ebby from OM
is a little drop of anguish in the pool neither of you can help but stir. I can feel the ache. Very moving.
I enjoyed reading your poem, I have felt that way myself, and you put it so well, thank you :)
very nice poem gina...seems like someone hurt u real bad...i hope he/she gets his....and i hope you find someone