has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews
what "little" fears others have and zoom in on our own.
This poem reads smoothly like all of your work. The lesson
is one I needed today.
i think this is clearly the best of your three poems today / it reads very well from first to last line /
Strong images here
oft times not seen
until it's too late.
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