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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2209/07/04

your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews

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by sandspike09/07/04

we tend to forget....

what "little" fears others have and zoom in on our own.
This poem reads smoothly like all of your work. The lesson
is one I needed today.

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by flyguy6909/07/04

School bus savior

wonderful metaphor!

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by PatCarrington09/08/04

nicely done

i think this is clearly the best of your three poems today / it reads very well from first to last line /

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by LeBroz08/11/05

Clear Terror

Strong images here
oft times not seen
until it's too late.

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