All Comments on 'First day of School'

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Teacher... may I go to the bathroom?

Because the subject matter gives me nightmares, and I don't want to do the homework! Sharp and succinct!

sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
it doesn't take 50 lines....

to tell it all. good JOB

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
First came the goosebumps

then the tears.

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I like it

ok, loved it, you waste not a single word, and hit us hard with truth, which happens to be so rare these days. keep'em comin' ;)

ferociouskittycatferociouskittycatover 19 years ago
Brave

...and extremely written tribute.

Great job hon. ;-)

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
memorial

this is perfect

no sentiment

just what the coldness

hard truth

facts

well done

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.

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