has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.
Because the subject matter gives me nightmares, and I don't want to do the homework! Sharp and succinct!
to tell it all. good JOB
then the tears.
(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)
ok, loved it, you waste not a single word, and hit us hard with truth, which happens to be so rare these days. keep'em comin' ;)
...and extremely written tribute.
Great job hon. ;-)
this is perfect
just what the coldness
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