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Rites of Passage Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/10/04

Double submission

I have already read the ch. 01 and 02 as one story on literotica somewhere during the last few weeks.

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by DJHyrrikhayne09/12/04

RE: Double Submission

To the person who posted about this being a double submission, there's a reason for that: I was the person who wrote the first one, but then decided to cut it into Parts 1 and 2, seeing as how Part 3 was so short, and I didn't want to create a, shall we say, imbalance.

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by sack12/04/04

starting to heat up!

keep going, you're doing fine! Excellent details in sex scene!

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