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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/04

Be original

There's a ton of these types of stories on here already. Think of something new, and come on back.

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by wistful_of_oz08/01/16

Dislike stories written the second person ...

.... Like, wasn't she there too? Perhaps she wasn't paying attention.

Did read it to the end but fuck knows why!

Normally like your stuff but not this one 1*

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