All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 45'

I look forward to each installment. I only wish I could read the whole story at once

it is about time to stop farting around a put a good size chapter in , this chapter was not even a full size one , else you are going to lose the people you have reading these chapters, people WILL GET BORED

I agree with Alun the story is solid and enjoyable but the shortness of them is bloody annoying focus on one story at a time. Write longer characters. Telfer is awesome so is this but make it longer

I disagree with many of the complaints about stories being to short. Since the first chapter at the end of May there has been constant stories coming out every 1-5 days and every one of them has been about 1 1/2 pages and this story is amazing. Please keep up the good work Pars001.

Please make the chapters longer your killing me here

As the others have said your chapters are pretty short, entertaining but short I've read a few of your stories and have started following you but I read your 45 chapters in two days- plz keep them coming.

Please do not let those who are complaining about the length of the chapters

Get to you

The storie is great and on here free

If they want more to read in a day they should go and buy a book

Thankyou for the great story i look forward to all the chapters