All Comments on 'Alan's Thoughts Ch. 08'

This was great! So so great!

Great storie, good pacing, i could follow it easily. Keep going

One of my favorite authors! Keep up the good work.

This is godly. Thank you

At least the story...

I kinda wondered if Mira had the ability too but I figure not, as she would have used it to make him cum first. She doesn't seem submissive and so wouldn't really have a desire to let him win.

Keep going, good story.

Mira was a tremendous addition; more!

I'd love to see this story continued

Hopefully this will be continued. Keep checking for updates.

Keep it up, don't stop this story now. It's crazy hot.

Please continue the series. Really enjoyed reading and can't wait for next installment.

Just glancing at each chapter’s description and see Aviendha. Guessing your a WoT fan?

I want to give this ten stars! WOW!

More homophones than a few. Bent at 5he waste? Really? Many others too.

I’m really enjoying reading this but you are in dire need of an editor.

Best of luck finding one. You have a great talent.

Bill S.

Really? All the shit that's went on and he draws the line at fucking his niece? Even though it's painfully obvious she wants him. Laughable really. So very arbitrary these lines we choose not to cross. Glad he got over it. He fucked her into another dimension by the sound of it and it appears he was barely using his powers actively. Perhaps they're evolving.

Aviendha is perhaps a little crazy. Seems to have been plotting to get Alan fired and took quite the risk. I think she hates men or at least has issues with men she thinks are womanizers. Probably something happened to her in the past with one and it left a scar. Wonder what will happen to her now.