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Wonderful
This story is one of the best I've read in ages...it didn't follow the same old rules with a fairy tale princess and her prince, the "perfect" bodies.....it was warm, wild and erotic....glad somebody realized the value of us bbw...thank you for sharing.
curvy is better
I love a curvy woman. Keep your thin women I like mine with padding grin thanks for a wonderful erotic story. Enquiring minds want to know what happened to her ?
horny
i got so horny reading this story when my hubby came home from work i had him fuck the hell out of me i really liked it when i got it up the ass
Very well written...
and very hot.
Sexy scene ruined!
I thought this was reasonably well-written until I got to the scene where the man switches back and forth between the woman's vagina and ass. This isn't sexy, it's a health risk for the woman. It was distracting to see the ampersand (&) used in normal prose -- it's a symbol that's almost exclusively reserved for lists of proper names, not as an everyday substitute for "and."
Splendid!
The whole series, "A Whole Lotta Woman", was wonderful. Great story, good dialogue. Well told. It's refreshing to read from someone who eschews the "Barbie Dolls" in exchange for a REAL woman. Nicely done, & thank you for sharing your wonderful memories of this exceptional woman. It's comforting to know that you made the last years of her tragically short life enjoyable, & made her realize that she was truly loved.
To "Sexy Scene Ruined"
I don't believe it! This author writes an exceptional story, & you're bothered by his use of &'s! If all you perfectionists let things like spelling, grammar, & punctuation get in the way of enjoying a good story, then you are the ones with a problem; not the writer! If you nit pickers want to read a "perfect" story: here's an idea: WRITE ONE YOURSELF! Yeah, right! Most of you boneheads probably can't string two paragraphs together, & wouldn't know a good piece of writing if it jumped up & bit you on your "arse". Get a life! Who made you a literary critic anyway?! Ignore these assholes "Dreams Of Desire", & write any way you see fit!
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