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by jd4george09/08/04

Some nice images...

...and some nice lines. Consider tinkering with the lines a little... breaking some and combining others, and the poem might seem tighter.

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by carsonshepherd09/08/04

Waaahhh...

I weep tears of love and recognition darling.

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by Tathagata09/09/04

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This was wonderful.
So very Irish in it's tone and begrudging show of affection.
Well done

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by doormouse09/09/04

LOL

God I wish I'd written that!!!

Touche hon!! Well said ;-)

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