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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/09/04

I like this

however, adding "and so forth" to a poem is like using "etc" in a speech. If you want your reader to wonder, just leave the line as it is without and so forth...otherwise a good poem

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by carsonshepherd09/10/04

life imitates -

that green bathtub of yours.

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by AppleBiter08/01/05

As so often when I read your poetry, I have to say

sometimes I feel the same.

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by variable Xy08/06/05

see

you do write good poetry. nice elements and style. i like it lots ;)

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