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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/06/05

Keep it going

sooo good. Please write more about their encounter...

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by Bridget6903/06/05

Coming to an end...

Yet, this is just the beginning. I really do hope you continue this.

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by Anonymous05/22/05

lusty!

This was prety darn good. Don't stop writing now....

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by duddle14610/15/06

Awesome Technique!

This Writer has a most unusual approach. He seems to stop his story once in a while to 'talk' to his readers, apologizing when he meanders off the subject. Almost like listening to someone relate an incident. Well Written! Terrific Write!

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