All Comments on 'Too Good Too Bad'

But I will say that it appears that English is not your first language. Unfortunately that makes the story very difficult to read.

A kind editor might help.

Good on you for getting a story written and putting it out there, regardless of content.

No vote as the language barrier was so large.

I will keep this in mind and will try to be good in next upload

Kind of bad Cuckold Haiku

The real clue was the tickets for the "nicely icy hilly destination."

Plus the Indian English grammar construction.

A fair first effort, but do get an editor to help you out.

What was this? "So, you like kissing your new BOSS while his husband is out in the living room?"! Was the boss married to a man? They allow that in India? And "He asked me "WHO'S SLUT I AM?"...So after all the Boss was a gay slut! An awful plot added to a fucked up writing, could only result in a shitty story...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

definitely an indian writer from his vocabulary .....

Will not make you all upset in next story

you not only need an editor but also a writer.

The first problem I see in this first effort is in the set up. You have the narrator say;

"Jack is the homemaker and I am the one who brings money home and this happened just a few months back."

Then you describe the husband coming home from work.

I like the description of a ski trip as a "nicely icy hilly destination".

The bully BOSS is pretty unreal, but no more so than the other characters I suppose. Keep writing, you will get better!

Whats amazing at that crap?? She has all the relatives at her home and is dressed like a slut??? Interesting! And then she fucks his boss and acts like the real slut she is!! Why is she married?? Without her husband she can live her dream as a whore and get payed for it!! Idiotic slut/cuck crap!!!

another illiterate WHORE posting cuck SHIT.

This was so badly written, I was confused as to what was going on.

fuck this peic of shet story and fuck this gay world

PATHETHIC FUKEN NIGER

Not too good, just really, really,bad.

Not much story. Hubby is a drunk, wife is a slut, whore, boss is an asshole. End of story so far.