All Comments on 'Angels in Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hmmmmm

i like it. next chapter have a sex scene. and maybe let the sister talk more about how she feels. how does the mother react.

ManoBlueManoBlueover 6 years ago
Crying and talking about heartbreak...

It got too corny.

JagnagJagnagover 6 years ago
Not too sure ??

Uncertain on this story, also i dont agree with violence against women no matter what !! 3* for now, lets see what comes next ok ?

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Only 3, with more understanding could be more.

She is 21. Is she still a virgin?

He is a DORK for not showing tenderness towards Sarah.

He has hurt her.

We need another chapter to build the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nah

Poorly written non-incest story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very hard to read

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