There are too many grammar mistakes and it makes it difficult to read .One minute her boyfriend knows she's a virgin the next he exclaims "oh your a virgin" ??? He's twenty on one paragraph and twenty one in the next .good story but could be so much improved .
English
Poorly Done
Just diatribe against the Catholic church and not very erotic
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There are too many grammar mistakes and it makes it difficult to read .One minute her boyfriend knows she's a virgin the next he exclaims "oh your a virgin" ??? He's twenty on one paragraph and twenty one in the next .good story but could be so much improved .
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