All Comments on 'You Remain in Me'

carry that desire like an animating flame; a source of heat, or perhaps, given your name, a breath of life. Let it stand for possibility - reminding you that amazing things can happen - rather than consume you and burn you to ash. If you are, in fact, a lot like Psyche, then you sleep with a blade and are destined for a happy ending.

Also, I like your poems.