by Henry_C_Roberts
Here is artwork of Susie
http://imgur.com/a/JqtKm
This has been provided by
http://designerinc.deviantart.com/
Awesomely, he altered Susie's outfit for the story. Thanks Designerinc
it seems a pity that you paid less attention to editing the story than your disclaimer at the beginning. FAR too many writing errors. spelling, vocab, punctuation, all suffered.
As mentioned, desperately needs editing. Good basic story though.
In a world where most likely women rule, due to their overwhelming majority, somehow a law is in place where the man has the power? With all these women and their libidos going up as you describe, wouldn't it be the other way around? The man would be parceled out to the powerful women.
I will look into editing, more.
The main focus of this story was the ability of men to request without rejection.
The idea of the women not being against it was to make it more willing and not forced in most instances. I will try to consider more reality in other ideas. Thanks
I guess men are sexist even in porn. :)
In a world that had a plague around 1950 and took two centuries to recover, there wouldn't be Star Wars.
If it took two centuries to recover, nobody would have been making Star Wars a mere quarter century later.
You never know..
Honestly, the addition of Star Wars was just to have the character in a shirt most everyone would know. I did not ponder it too much.
However, could have been a desk with a missing outline for Star Wars found 150 years later in a garage sale. :)
Also, the desk made an air tight seal to stop the degrading of the paper itself.
Was there a story? Could not get past all the disclaimers and bs at the start. Get rid of that junk so we can find the story.
Next time, spin your mouse wheel one half rotation. You will go right by them.
You're welcome.
See you next time you can't sleep.
Loved every bit of it ty. Disclaimers tee shirt and all.
Its a different reality. I like this.
With all the disclaimers I was afraid to read it in case I did something wrong.
You really dont need them. A few words wont stop pirating, and would be ignored anyway.