All Comments on 'Mystery Lover'

What a great story, can't wait for it to continue. keep up the good work!!

THIS STORY IS A BIG IMPROVEMENT FROM YOUR FIRST TWO STORIES AND COULD BE DEVELOPED INTO A NICE SERIES OF SEVERAL STORIES IF YOU INTRODUCE MORE PEOPLE INTO THE ACTIVITIES, SISTER, DAD, AUNTS UNCLES ETC. A GOOD MIX OF ACTION DESCRIPTION + ROOM FOR THE IMIGINATION WILL MAKE A GOOD STORY, ROBERT HIENLIEN WAS A MASTER OF THAT ( STRANGER IN A STRANGE LAND ) I RATED IT 75 AS IM SURE YOU WILL IMPROVE WITH EXPERIENCE. BILL

My mom was working at a local hotel and would provide a little "service" on the side. I always went there for some pussy but didn't know about my mom being there that day. I asked the porter to send up a woman as he ushered me into a room and gave him the money for a quickie. I was undressed and had a big hardon when there was knock at the door, and my mom came in.....talk about surprise!!!!!

She said she ne needed the extra money and only worked as a receptionist ocassionally. She said we couldn't do this since I was her son but I said to get her clothes off because I had paid for pussy and was going to fuck her mom or not. In those days men actually came inside women and I shot wads and wads of cum in her. She got off too. She never worked there again and I always paid her ten dollars for sex when I had the cash. That was back in 1959.

Oh yes! What a red hot Slut!

I'm very turned on by his story. The "old man" really did a number on them!

shes very lucky to have a hustband like what she has

by an accomplished and creative writer. I love the interaction between Brad and his mom, the sexy dialogue, their excitement at having the boy's prick totally enveloped by warm, wet, loving mommy-twat. I find some of the touches charming, as when Brad's mother says, "I brought my left hand to massage his balls." A mother cuddling her boy's balls is one of the sweetest gestures I can imagine.

Mom and son will get the pleasure.