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by Anonymous

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by Angeline09/10/04

Vintage You!

Brief and precise and meaningful.

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by Liar09/10/04

Your poem is reviewed

...in the New Poems thread over at the forum.

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by twelveoone09/11/04

Wow

this troubles me, acts as a signal...
"sincere exchanges are less sincere"
I like this space, instead of a line break
"trifles from here"
WOW
"color of the cat-cloud"
I was wondering, if you couldn't come up with another word instead of flown, something more cat like
"flown across your forehead"
...acts as a signal, that I better pay attention, especially after a title like that.
It is tough to get so many comments out, in something so short - in awe

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by tazz31706/08/12

SILENCE

the most sincere form of respect, TK U MLJ LV NV

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