All Comments on 'Jennifer's Surprise'

by Ann Douglas

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teddybearclubteddybearclubover 6 years ago
Very Good

Ann if I had any cmpliants about this it is a little short. That aside it was well written. I enjoyed it. Thanks

Chrissie

TBC

cjbittxcjbittxover 6 years ago
to anonymous

you read a story on an erotic story page and the first thing you comment about are STD's? Its a fictional story!

Interesting twist and different take on a story - Thanks for writing Ann

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A touch short but..

It hits all the right notes for the reader to be captivated. T-Girl on G-Girl is one of my favorites.. Thank you.

RastanuraRastanuraover 6 years ago
To quote Gomer Pyle: Surprise! Surprise!

Loved it. Keep up the good work.

maxx308maxx308over 6 years ago
Thanks Ann

Thanks so much for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lovely story

Once again Ann, you continue to write exciting and wonderful stories. Thank you so very much for writing and sharing them.

KaereniSisterKaereniSisterover 6 years ago

Nice story Ann. It was a delightful read. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Robyn1859Robyn1859about 5 years ago
Oh my!

Love this story... So good to come back and read it again

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 4 years ago
Different strokes!!!

Very interesting and hot story! This is a nice change from your other stories, which I just love, and shows what a great author you are. Well done!

apollo_XIapollo_XIover 4 years ago

Different

Definitely a 5 though. Amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Lez / Trans fun in the sun on a tropical island

,.. make it up to me,.. do it again!!!

paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdalmost 4 years ago
Delightful Quick Hit!

My first from you....

Loved this.... short and sweet with an erotic kick!

Captivating and sensuous, kinky and perverse without being sick.

Loved it.....

Now I need to read more of your stories!

rushman1ukrushman1ukalmost 3 years ago

Fantastic, 5 stars. My wife and I have both had sex with transsexuals.

DeLord12804DeLord12804about 2 years ago

"Do it again" Those are the three words an older guy dreads. XD

Such a fun read, nicely done.

gunmakergunmaker8 months ago

After your recent story I figured I'd try this one. Surprise, I've already read it and gave it a 5. I do think the new one is a bit better. less hurried.

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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...