All Comments on 'The Pony Ranch'

Not a bad start some back fil would be great especially if her mates came looking as well....

lol New Zealand is a country. It’s not some small island or whatever and you wouldn’t go on a boat ride around it’s coast because it’s so large. It’s like the size of an American state lmao what a fail. Maybe change it to a tropical island like Rarotonga or Fiji to make it more realistic.

Don’t be ridiculous! It’s a story, let someone have artistic license and take readers on a journey. It’s not all about who is accurate or fits in your bubble. Go write something yourself that you think is good enough since you’re so picky. And to the writer: please feel free to continue this story - I wanna see where it goes!

Too right. New Zealand is part of Australia and its two islands not one. They are to busy shagging sheep to worry about pony girls. Sheep girl in a sheep skin coat would be there ultimate turn on.