All Comments on 'Wedding Dance'

by Ann Douglas

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sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
Nitpick

"Couldn't you have waited just a few more minutes." - Why? He already came!

AxelottoAxelottoover 6 years ago
He just wanted to cuddle and enjoy the afterglow

before he got up and wiped off his hand...

That was nice. Made me sorry I didn't attend more weddings when i was a youfth

And the grammar nerd in me says extra thank yous for the lack of wrong words and general high quality of the writing/editing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great story

I enjoyed it so much I look forward to reading all your stories.

I checked out your profile and you are exactly why I decided to read your story.

Mike

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Did you know

that 'thought' has a 't' at BOTH ends?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sweet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Delightful!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Sweet.

Memories of my daughters wedding and a missed opportunity after dancing with one of her lovely friends. Timing was not as good as the chemistry...

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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...