All Comments on 'Cotton Candy Pt. 02'

Wao.. I thought the beginning is great, but this is amazing. I love the way you described things in such plain words. I just have one complaint, regarding the delay in between the parts. Please try to work a little faster. Once you start having a cotton candy it's hard to stop; especially when you love it so much

I want more.. Let it be a 20 part story.. I will read every single one.

Thanks, that you like the story. I already send the 3rd part for editing, and I hope I will get the edited version in a few days. Thanks.

It's hard to write a 20 part story. But there will be another 3 parts for sure, because I have to tell you the story after all. hope you love them as well. Thanks

This is just a pure romantic story that I am so fond of. Keep on writing, I want more.

Simply loved it.

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I love the way you setup and hope you have a grand ending. I guess it's to early to decide which way this one is heading upto but I hope you live up to the expectations. All the best.

When I read the part 1, I thought it was the best setup ever. You prove me wrong on the 2nd part and I hope you have more to come in recent future.

Thanks for the feedbacks and I really want to thank all of you who liked the story. I promise I will try my best not to disappoint you. The next parts will be more passionate (as per the demand of the story) and I also hope you love the story when it actually reveals. Thanks for reading.

I can't wait for part 3! I love this story!

The part 3 will be there within a week or so..hope you enjoy it as well. But things might get a bit complicated when the story begins to reveal. Can't assure that you love it or not but I hope you find it worth reading.

Can't wait for the next part..

I think it's a bit low on passion but you make it up in romance part. Hope the next parts contains more passionate scenes.

Nicely written anyway.

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Sorry, if I disappointed you and I totally accept that these two parts don't have much passionate scenes. But the next parts will be more passionate as I told before. Thanks for reading and sharing the feedbacks.

I love this series. It's romantic and the love between these two girls is sweet. It's perfect the way it is.

Please publish the next part asap. Dying to read the next part and it sounds quite interesting.

I fully approve of the slow burn in a story and that's what you're giving us.This story gets better by the moment and I am really enjoying it. I"m all agog to find out what Olivia's back story is: she's a lovely person but given too easily to inappropriate fits of anger. There has to be something more than the odd little hint that we've had so far. You're telling a great tale, DD, five stars worth of great.

Olivia is quite opposite to the word anger and maybe one of the most innocent characters, but you always can't predict everything. You will surely come to know more about Olivia and Tina in the next parts and I hope you like it. Thanks

Your writing is so good and I love how you have drawn the story out. Well done. I cannot wait for your next installment

I really appreciate that you liked the story and I don't know if it can be called a buildup or not but once the story starts to reveal you will understand why these are needed. Every hint and every single incident is leading to something. That's all I can say. Thanks.

When is your next instalment!! I honestly cannot wait what a great story so far! Is there a way of getting an an announcement for the next instalment?

The next part will be published within a week

Thanks for the beautiful story but it's been long since the 2nd part was published. Juat want to know when the third part is coming? Can't wait to read it

Already submitted the third part. It might take two or three days for someone to approve it for publication. Thanks for the comments and feedbacks. It's always good to know that you liked the story. Hope you like the third part even more.

Thank you. This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I look forward to reading more. Wish I can give more than 5

Simply outstanding, can't wait for the third part. The possibilities are immance and I can assume it will unwrap some unexpected things.

Thanks for both the positive and negative feedbacks, I will surely work on the negatives. I am not sure what you must be expecting and what is unexpected but there are some facts which are sure to reveal through the next parts. I hope you don't have to wait too long for it as I already submitted the 3rd part. Hope you enjoy reading it. And I also want to thanks all the readers for the love and votes. I never expected it to get so much appreciation from all of you. So thanks for the love.

Simply loved the characters you've created and the way you described thd thing is awesome. Can't wait to read more of you. Thanks for the beautiful story

I loved both parts and hope the third part will be as much enjoyable as the previous ones. Is there any way that I can get a notification or something once the next parts been published?

Thanks for sharing such a lovely story anyways.

Thanks, for the love and the feedback debbie and tsarkar.

The third part is still due and I hope it will be published soon (lol, never know might get rejected as well)

You can follow me on twitter @DeceptiveDomain for updates.

Thanks.

I loved the story, but the gap between parts are too much to kill the interest, I hope you submit the next parts soon enough, so I actually remember what happened in the last one. Thanks

I am really sorry for the delay, but I submitted the story and it's still pending after 8 days. Not sure what the issue is bit generally it doesn't take this much time. I edited the story after submitting that might be the reason I guess. I hope it gets approved soon. Thanks for waiting.

I love your slow-building romance! The characters are just wonderfully sweet. I'm so glad I didn't discover it until five parts were published, otherwise I may have gone insane waiting.

Nice to see you keeping the story bubbling along.

Once again there is just enough erotic parts to keep people interested with an actual story moving smoothly :)

Well done

Marvelous .... A twnder sweet love story ..... An amazing talent you offering here writing such lovely chapters for our entertainment ...... So damn cute

There are so many details or conversations or actings, making this story extraordinary

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