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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
needs some more work

but fine just the same

PenisvixenPenisvixenover 6 years agoAuthor
Fine as is

Thanks, but a poem never needs work from the writer's eye. I wrote it as it happened and wouldn't change a thing. Appreciate the comment though.

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