All Comments on '#1 Lyla meets her match'

The character in the poem still admires the sex he/she wants to become. Some transsexuals become female because they want men, others because they love women. While the pot is boiling don't hesitate, meld! In many ways the trans becomes the best of both worlds, ideal for a threesome with a man and a woman at either end.

Poetically avoid trite phrases (Nirvana) and personal asides (my specialty) and weird inventions (pussy pool). Likewise final three lines could use more description of what went wrong and why with resolution. Don't leave the reader dangling like a strand of cum from a leaky penis.