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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/13/04

you are

a wonderful poet, this poem is so heartfelt, tugged right at my soul, because, we all wish to be remembered, dont we? enjoyed very much

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by PatCarrington09/13/04

i liked this.

i found it far more enjoyable than 'god's pissed' / in my mind, this is much better poetry / i'm not sure about the last two lines, or their separation from the body, but there is no question in my mind this is far superior to your other poem, which seems to be drawing attention while this is not /

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