All Comments on 'A Vampire's Tail'

Great story! I loved your writing style and flow of the story. Great read that got my juices flowing! Thank you!

sucks as far as the language arts are concerned though.

Hmmm your story at first mad me laugh a bit but as I read it more I started to really enjoy it... Made me very wet.. I just wished it wasn't only a page long!! Keep writing my friend!!

Proof readers aren't that expensive and if you want to make a living out of writing for goodness SAKE have your work proofread. Parts of it are a joke, simply because you're too lazy to check out what you've written.

Anonymous (or two) : Point taken about proof-reading, I'll do better. Elaboration on the language arts comment would help me improve.

JoJodncr17: Thankyou .. glad to help.

Sexybabymam69: Thankyou, but what made you laugh ... something I can improve on in a longer story?