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Bien ?crite: Shawn, tha's what I'm talkin' about
C'est une histoire bien ?crite et des sentiments doux et tendres.
This is a very well written story, a bit sentimental to be sure, but striking in its intelligence and sensitivity. Intelligence and sensitivity---these traits, along with a nice ear for language and a feel and eye for mood and detail, transcend the sentimentality of the story, giving it much warmth and a lived-in sense of the real.
Oh, yeah, those love scenes? Too short, perhaps, but oh, so tender, so real...and yeah, so SEXY and HOT.
Shawn----glad to see you gave up the Irish Blague for the real Irish Heart. Doode. I had my doubts about you, but you pulled it all off anyway (lesson: NEVER, ever underestimate the Irish).
And Doode, what can I say? You took sound advice: You dealt. You made it happen. You married the babe. You both won.
Damn. "Tha's what I'm talkin' about."
Really Liked It
I really like the fact that they got married. I love both of the characters and I can't wait to read Sean Speaks 4. Hopefully you will submit another story.
Great!!!!
These are some of the best stories I've ever read, please please write more.......
Keep Going!
When r u going to write more?
Hearth warming story
Too bad you stopped writing. Please don't underestimate yourself. I'm sure people get better from reading you.
nice
a very nice story. :) you are a wonderful writer. please continue writing. :) i am glad i have found you here. :) kudos!!! :)
Your Stories
I love the way that you build up such a slow yet powerful romance. It really shows a lot of volume. I enjoy reading stories that focus on the relationship more than the sex. Thank you for sharing your talent and I'm a big fan.
Btw, I've been reading all of your stories and there are quite a few that are not completed. Would you consider finishing them? They are amazing and I would love to see their final outcome.
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