All Comments on 'Slaves of Sif Ch. 08'

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vegas1969vegas1969over 6 years ago
Fantastic!

Another great chapter in this series. You really do a wonderful job of capturing all the nuances of these womens inner angst and emotions. I hope that Maria proves the greater of these two mighty Alphas and has Sif moaning like a cheap whore in heat as she gets owned while being speared on Maria's strap on. How wonderful it would be to have Sif bow down and enthusiastically call Maria Mistress.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story, hope for change in arc

I hope that Maria can actually turn the tide and become the mistress, perhaps ending the saga in some way by topping sif and ending her reign on earth. It would be very satisfying since she is very cruel compared to Maria’s enticing heroic possibility for an arc.

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