All Comments on 'Recovery Pt. 03'

by GiovanniBruscato

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sabra16023sabra16023over 6 years ago
A Great Story

Please keep the words flowing into the next chapter. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I need CPR!!!!

I honestly don't know how I'm still alive after reading this, my heart melted before page one was even over. Absolutely love the strict slow burn of the story progression and the fact that their love is only growing bigger and stronger the more time we spend with them. And now that their aunt gave them an OK pass to do as they see fit as long as they do it out of adoration life couldn't be better. Those small moments of doubt like when those girls approached them at the caffe were used adorably (Dottie was a bit doubtful but in a really cute way) and only strengthened their bond. With the exam around the corner I expect things to escalate when he comes home tomorrow yet have complete confidence that it won't turn into a sex fest on the doorstep. How they managed to come home in once piece still baffles my mind though...

Another 5* and hopefully the next part is in the works already!

honybipolahonybipolaover 6 years ago
it keeps getting better and hotter

with the romance too.. so please bring on the rest of the story sooner... can't wait to read the chapters any longer...there goes all the stars

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 6 years ago
Great add!

LOVED this new chapter, with Peter telling Dottie she's his dream girl. I love how you crafted their banter and interaction, with the scene of Ashley and Celeste proving quite playful too.

I love how you've written them so into each other with the aunt so accepting. I hope to read the "full coupling" soon; if you write it anything like their interactions to date, it will sizzle! 5

SirCarlSirCarlover 6 years ago
All chapters, so far, are

Very well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.

va45va45over 6 years ago
Good chapter

Very loving and giving, hope to read more

thedayafterthedayafterover 6 years ago

Love the story so far, please continue it.

honybipolahonybipolaover 6 years ago
completely hooked

can't wait to read the rest of this hot story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Next

When the next story coming don't keep us waiting..

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Good!

It would have gotten a 5 star had he taken her virginity.

rightbankrightbankover 3 years ago
He should learn from his sister

she is younger, more aggressive, and eager.

he is clueless

WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

Hot, hot,hot!!!!!

5/5

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

Well done but the discussion with the aunt was a little too vague for me to believe. 5*

ScottishTexanScottishTexan7 months ago

Another excellent chapter. I really enjoyed the fact that you are putting the emotional connection in front of the sexual attraction. I've read too many sibling incest stories where they fuck just to get off. 🙄 I prefer the love stories. 5/5

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