by GiovanniBruscato
I honestly don't know how I'm still alive after reading this, my heart melted before page one was even over. Absolutely love the strict slow burn of the story progression and the fact that their love is only growing bigger and stronger the more time we spend with them. And now that their aunt gave them an OK pass to do as they see fit as long as they do it out of adoration life couldn't be better. Those small moments of doubt like when those girls approached them at the caffe were used adorably (Dottie was a bit doubtful but in a really cute way) and only strengthened their bond. With the exam around the corner I expect things to escalate when he comes home tomorrow yet have complete confidence that it won't turn into a sex fest on the doorstep. How they managed to come home in once piece still baffles my mind though...
Another 5* and hopefully the next part is in the works already!
with the romance too.. so please bring on the rest of the story sooner... can't wait to read the chapters any longer...there goes all the stars
LOVED this new chapter, with Peter telling Dottie she's his dream girl. I love how you crafted their banter and interaction, with the scene of Ashley and Celeste proving quite playful too.
I love how you've written them so into each other with the aunt so accepting. I hope to read the "full coupling" soon; if you write it anything like their interactions to date, it will sizzle! 5
Very well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.
she is younger, more aggressive, and eager.
he is clueless
Well done but the discussion with the aunt was a little too vague for me to believe. 5*
Another excellent chapter. I really enjoyed the fact that you are putting the emotional connection in front of the sexual attraction. I've read too many sibling incest stories where they fuck just to get off. 🙄 I prefer the love stories. 5/5