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Your poem
has been mentioned in Sunday's review.
lol
In some more normal world than this one, there is a book with a list of reasons why it's ok to kill your wife. I think this is one of them! Thanks!
*walking away still laughing...
Aye
Hey, Popeye (love the ref.) you got a real classic here
"Non-slip shower flowers are always in bloom,
must be the all the rain they get."
as a suggestion, I would take a look here to see what to leave out.
"The only pollen they produce is
a bunch of tiny black bits of leftover
soap and grime and skin and God only knows what else."
you are a better man than i
~
I laughed out loud and loved the description of the whore too.
Excellent piece.
Shows how the everyday is a poem waiting to be born
Thank you
*
Very descriptive with imaginative simile, like this:
I put my brush down and try to scrub
the yellow of an old man?s teeth off the porcelain.
Great job
well put together.
this was interesting reading / and quite enjoyable / i think you have an extra word in 'must be the all the rain they get' /
This is great fun!
I've been the same whore on far too many Saturday mornings! Just wondering what it would be like to be a bit more aggressive with Popeye... (such a wonderful image)... with something like "I kicked some water in his face".
Thanks for the chuckles!
Will remember this
each time i clean the tub. Thanks for a great memory...will make the job a little less tedious.
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