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by salo
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Anonymousover 6 years agoThe question one should never ask
gets answered.
Some bad lines " opulence of her end" and some good ones,
"She slid through the blankets
Pale and dangerous as a snake."
Don't know what it means but sounds good.
saloover 6 years agoAuthorThanks for the feedback!
It can be a challenge to avoid cliché without falling into obtuse language, I'll keep your comments in mind.
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