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haiku: serenade

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by tungtied2u09/12/04

Your poem

has been mentioned in Sunday's review.

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by Tathagata09/12/04

But wasn't it

worth the wait?
I think you had to wait for the right song to sing
: )
I like this

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by 09/12/04

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Impact writing, very emotive.

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by lostandfounder09/16/04

Although....

I tend to dislike a single haiku, this is very well done. A very potent mixture of emotions in a few words. Nice work!

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