All Comments on 'Ladies Of The Night'

by guybrush806

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ImaginatrixImaginatrixover 19 years ago
Mmmm

I love your little intro... and the story wasn't bad either...

Heels LoverHeels Loverover 19 years ago
Very Dirty!

Love the way you described the scene and the battle between 'good' and 'evil'! Very arousing, especially the sensualness of the lingerie. In the next installment... wicked high heels and tight, sexy dresses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
"Your" or "You're"

Maaaajor turnoff for me, and for no good reason! All of your other grammar was good, though there were other (smaller) flaws.

That said, very erotic story. I don't personally tend to go for stories in 2nd person as they tend to be lower quality, but this was extremely erotic and had powerful imagery. I'm impressed!

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