All Comments on 'Dystopia Pt. 03'

I am really enjoying this story. Hope you continue it.

Great story; I am enjoying the build up. I also like your writing style; your details make the setting much more realistic. Thank you.

I am enjoying your story very much & love the slow build up & great detail because as the reader I feel like I'm right there with Isla. I can't wait, but will, anxiously for the next chapter!! Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

.....with this exceptional jewel of a story. Bravo. The gradual buildup of the story to the anticipated evolution of the Emil and Isla relationship has been like unwrapping a present. But, it is time. Much look forward to them now bonding together in a love relation that both sorely need. And, sense coming challenges that must be met together.

I absolutely love your writing! When I read first two parts I could not wait to read more, I was so excited when I saw that you published the 3rd part... Please don't make us wait this long for the next part and keep up the good work ;)

It was worth the wait. Thank you.

Looking forward to Chapter 4 of Dystopia Saga. Very interesting plot , can't imagine how story will continue. Will girl fall in love or in lust? Will latest male cause trouble for our hero. Does he have prior acquaintance with either one of two major character s? Very intriguing, please print next part soon. Well written, minimal sex so far. Interested Reader.

Really enjoyed the first three parts. I shall be waiting impatiently for the next. I really hope these two can move toward a better understanding of each other.

The problem with having the talent to write such an engrossing story is that one attracts fans who want more. Thanks for the enjoyment, but approaching six months for next chapter. Any word?

Am sad to be forced to bail on this story. Have enjoyed its beginning greatly and it had great promise. But, waiting half a year for chapters is too much to keep interest. May check back in two or three years if still alive to see if anything actually materialized in this story. Such a shame.

Thank you for three great chapters. Some of your reviewers are impatient, but I urge you to take your time. Your story is loaded with enjoyable detail, and that detail requires a lot of research and multiple rewrites. Good things are worth waiting for and one of those "good things" will be your Chapter #4 !

Came back to this story. Still reads wonderfully - if not better than first time. Feel less blended by suspense and action. Meaning, now I do more appreciate the nuances in the comic to awkward scenes between Isla & Emil. Slow approach works just fine for me. Thanks and all the best