The Wrong Movie

Really, really great.

I suggest you keep going with this story and its endless possibilities.

Awesome Spectacular

He shoud have fucked more faster and go on with the story as a sequel. The fucking was awesome especially when the brother denied having feelings for his sister but anyways they did it.

Jesus, she talked a lot.,

He just should've shoved his dick in mouth to shut her-the-fuck up. They both enjoyed themselves so why wouldn't either of them admit it? I'm glad he slammed it in her pussy 1st so there could be a sequel.

Hidden Fellings

This story caught a real aspect of siblings. hidden feelings between brother and sister. if your sister is very hot u have no real choice but to stare, dream and masturbate. and the sister plays on that and is very open enough to play on the fact that u dont have sex with family. good story

Sequel ?

Very hot ! I would like to read a sequel where these two saw an anal scene in the video and the sister want to try that, too.

Great Story

That was one of the best stories...A sequel would be great for this story. Keep it up

Great Story

That was one of the best stories...A sequel would be great for this story. Keep it up

Great Story

That was one of the best stories...A sequel would be great for this story. Keep it up

sounds familiar...

I've read this story before - a brother for life by anne - it's almost the same story. you need to be more original

In the Mouth

Loved it, but you should let her suck his cock next time and cum in her mouth.

I like it!

i like it because its kinda straight forwad

Good Story

It was nice to see the woman as the initiator. But her 180 degree flip from being angry to seducing him was a stretch.

Paradox

I just love the fuck stories that includes a penitent, fecklessly innocent young guy and a totally clueless, and completely amoral teenage fem fatale. Like that is sooooo real life...Fantasy in other words...Gotta love it!

Good one

Although it was a little unbelievable, the dialogue was pretty realistic and funny. I hate cliched porn dialogue, no one talks like that in real life...at least I dont!

Young and Inexperenced

I love it when both characters or at least the woman are inexperienced its way better than sluts and whores.

eh...

I like your other, slower-paced ones better. I'm mainly commenting about how this was nothing like that other story he said. He must have said the wrong one, because incest was the only similarity.

good work!

Yep....this was, though a bit fast, fun.

Good

it was a great story..
Should be more of it love hate turns into a great fuck session.
WishI had the oppurtunity with my sisters to try this

Movie

I wish Rachael was my sister :)

OH RACHAEL I HOPE YOUR ON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THE PILL , IF NOT WE MUST HAVE A CHAPTER TWO. SO WE CAN FIND OUT IF HE KNOCKED HER UP. IT'S A GOOD STORY , BUT IT WENT TO FAST. NEXT TIME GIVE US MORE DETAILS PLEASE............. LAROC OF AGES

ohhhhhhhh gowwwwwwwwddddddddd its fucking hot story

i wish i had a sister like her. i would hv fucked her day and night and made her pregnanat of my child.

THE PILL , IF NOT WE MUST HAVE A CHAPTER TWO.

Unless she went to get a Morning After pill.

Another male char written as a whiney pussy...sigh...

Yep, at least she put the little whiner pussy in his place fast. Annoying authors writing annoying twelve year old boys annoyingly in stories then changing the ages to 18 so they can post to this site, like its even believable! Lol.

BE WARNED if you read this story!! There are three chapters, only three and then the story JUST STOPS!! Its pretty good but it just leaves you hanging, argh!!