All Comments on 'Breaking Out Pt. 01'

if you have written the rest of this can you post it NOW and another thing, MORE than two pages 😀

Great beginning. Sounds promising. Looking forward to subsequent chapters.

Your presentation is excellent. Very good story indeed. cheers!

You continue to deliver and this one may just be the best one yet. Thank you. I dearly love your characters almost as much as you obviously do.

Good start and interesting characters. We know where it will go, but not what twists you may have planned

I can't wait for more! You write so beautifully and your editor (if it isn't you) does a great job!

Keep it up - when can we expect 'Part Deux'?

Affectionately and Gratefully

Corinne x

Yet another new story written to your usual high standards. What I can never understand, Shaima, is how often your tales start off with a fairly low score while some others, not very well written, enter with higher scores. All being well, the worth of this one will be recognised quickly and your score upped to its proper level. Roll on the next chapter.

too many first ch. stories just jumps to the sex scene's by the middle of the first page, you really know how to build up a story first, can't wait for ch 2

I can't wait to read more of this story! Thank you!

Looking forward to the next instalment!

I just finished chapter 1, and am getting ready to start chapter 2. I will try to read it slower, so that you have time to write and post chapter 3 :D Thanks for sharing this with us!

You make it hard to choose a favourite, they are all great, you are keeping your proud Aussie grinning

Such a understanding from a young lady is fabulous ..... Lovely story well written

great pace, engaging