All Comments on 'End of the Universe'

bites yet we are all rather guilty, aren't we. You expressed this sentiment very well, good work :)

I really like this--it's tight and written with great precision.

Some great stanzas in this, very descriptive and the imagery is done so well. I especially enjoyed this one:

"We have trapped our universe

underfoot

Cocooned it in charcoal grey

Suffocated it with fumes

Drowned it in diesel"

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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