by sex4u4647
finally something for us older couples hubby and i realy enjoyed reading your stories --- has realy bin helpfull with our sex keep the stories cumming
Although I certainly enjoyed this story, I am wondering if it moved too fast to its conclusion. I am particularly concerned with how quickly the newcomers to the group became active. The seniors that I know, and I am one also, may have ended up in simialr situations, but it would have taken more effort convincing them to let down their inhibitions (and clothing) than was portrayed in the story. I would have liked to see how you accomplished it, particularly if one of the couples were less inclined to participate that the other.
I hope you keep writing on this theme. There are so very few stories with older couples as protagonists. As a reader over 55, I particularly enjoy stories with more mature subjects.