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by jd4george09/14/04

It drives me nuts...

...when a poet crams so much story into so few lines. And then to realize that the poem arose from inital silliness!!!

And then the fires started... whew!

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by Anonymous09/14/04

I believe

that this poem says a lot, implies even more. Reminds me of the freaks burning books and Beatles' albums just because they didnt understand. Good work Boo :)
xoxox

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by tarablackwood2209/14/04

your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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by Angeline09/15/04

This is really good

there's an honesty and naturalness in your words that always lifts up your poems, gf. You did it again. xo, Ange

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by tungtied2u09/15/04

It's hard not to conjour

the memories of the blitzkrieg from your words Boo. You too strike quickly and with power.

*no thermometer

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by CharleyH09/15/04

great corpse entry

The brevity of this poem is powerful, though I place it, through my imagination, into a more contemporary context. I like the use of natural elements, and the juxtaposition between the natural rain/thunderstorms and the man made, fire, which on a symbolic level do more for me than I can possibly articulate here.

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by PatCarrington09/15/04

enjoyed this.

this moves so well / the visions are crystal clear / very well-written /

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by twelveoone10/01/04

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very nicely written

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