All Comments on 'D?rang?'

Though, despite the rationale and impetus, it was a tad too random for me. Still, an oddly intriguing read.

The first word to come to mind was 'delicious', Lauren. That and exciting. You create terriffic word pics- I really like this a lot- Thanks!

The way you describe what you feel in your poems is wonderful! To be able to express such emotion is amazing.

~ Honey

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

I read today, this one really kicked my ass...a sense of mysterious sensuality cloaks this entire expose'....I am reeling....thank you Lauren

You amaze me with your gift for words! Thoughts and feelings wrapped up in such exquisite packaging. Thank you!

Very good — I especially love the 3rd from last strophe {It knows how to soften in tongues,} and the way it sequences its thoughts.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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