All Comments on 'Suburban Summer'

Really loved the story!

Really hot tale. Good buildup. Keep going!

FYI, a couple of typos.

Free rein, as in a horse's reins. Reign is what a queen does.

Stood, not stook.

There was another I can't find.

Overall a very good job. Keep it up.

I really liked your story, it really teased me. maybe next time describe the sex more in detail but over all it was. sexy

Why didn't you finish your story?

Story was going very well but then just ended pretty quickly. Maybe make a sequel to keep it going??

I used to clean my neighbor's pool and they let me swim whenever I wanted. They were in their fifties and their three kids grown and moved away. Their daughter who was 30 divorced and moved back home. She used to tease me whenever I was over. One day she whipped off her bikini and said she preferred to swim naked. For a high school kid, I was in heaven. Yes, she ended up with my virginity, yes we had sex all summer long.....and for the next year and a half until she moved away. I miss her.