All Comments on 'Not So Unrequited, Maybe? Ch. 03'

by OEdward

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Umm...

What's with the switch from 1st person to 3rd?

OEdwardOEdwardover 6 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous - Switch

Oh wow! I didn't realise I switched! Wrote the first 2 chapters a long time ago and just wrote this fairly recently. Huge mistake.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This was good, fun and playful. I'm going to check for more :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I give you credit for picking it up after so long and working on it so if pov is ur big mistake.... no big deal. To many stories are left unfinished so cheers for you for picking it back up after so long

EdeyEdeyover 1 year ago

Great story, I love it, although the POV switch was a bit surprising ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved that the hot jock was the one doing the first sucking and got his face fucked hard by the nerdy guy - swallowing his load of cum.

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