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Hot August Afternoon

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by Anonymous

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by PunyMe08/24/17

Nice summer reading!

Thanks - good story! So that's why the tomatoes taste funny!

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by Many_Memories08/25/17

The tomatoes

DON'T taste funny! You added too much salt! They didn't need any more salting than they already had! Next Chapter, Please!

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by Xantastic08/25/17

Tomatoes?

I'd prefer the melons, myself.... But a nice romp of a story! Hope he does go visit her at college!

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by Anonymous08/26/17

Great Cum

Fantastic story. Very well written, very sexy

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by VixenIrish08/31/17

Enjoyed that!

Hope there is a sequel!

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by RatedPG09/01/17

Great Summer read! Winner!

Hope you win....reminds me of water fights that got "out of hand"! ;-)

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by whodoyoodoo09/01/17

Great story!!!

I really enjoyed it!

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by Hopeless4luv09/07/17

Good clean fun!

Wash away those blues!

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by Dark_Storm01/21/18

Great start

But I reached the end and my main thought was "Is that all there is?" So much potential lost with the quick ending. Hints at additional action left unfulfilled.

This deserves either to be rewritten and expanded upon (best option) or a sequel.

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by zazrix903/05/18

Hawt

fantasy

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