All Comments on 'Hot August Afternoon'

Thanks - good story! So that's why the tomatoes taste funny!

DON'T taste funny! You added too much salt! They didn't need any more salting than they already had! Next Chapter, Please!

I'd prefer the melons, myself.... But a nice romp of a story! Hope he does go visit her at college!

Fantastic story. Very well written, very sexy

Hope there is a sequel!

Hope you win....reminds me of water fights that got "out of hand"! ;-)

I really enjoyed it!

Wash away those blues!

But I reached the end and my main thought was "Is that all there is?" So much potential lost with the quick ending. Hints at additional action left unfulfilled.

This deserves either to be rewritten and expanded upon (best option) or a sequel.

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