This is an incredible poem.
"I might as well hope..."
"They don't deserve..."
Absolutly perfect stanazas. This poem is a very quiet scream of emotion. Great work.
...I both like it, and dislike it. Perhaps it is because of the "bone" truth in it. In reading this, I can't separate the poet from the man in me, which means the poem worked!
the ones we loved most
Insist on reclaiming
The best of our lives
And burying it beneath hate?
All of this we share, and more sis. Moving, measured and heartfelt. Thanks, ang
*thermometer taken out of cold storage
I read this last night and felt it then. You have spoken so clearly here, Ange. Well done. Thanks
is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.
losing your religion are you?
Follow your heart, it's one of the purest I've ever seen, it won't let you down.
A hard poem to read,,,I'm sure it was hard to write.
Thank you for sharing
as always my thoughts are with you
You are stronger than most. You stand tall while others would crumble. I love and admire you for it.
this must have been difficult to keep a handle on / but you did / it would be easy to lose your way and tumble over in a direction that would be detremental to the quality of the work / you did not allow that to happen /
I think I know how you feel, in my own sort of way,wonderfully expressed :)
Sincerely one of your best...much thanks!
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