Real good write as it is. As the guy was cumin, he should have cried out her name.
Would of made better stort to call our her sister's name instead of her name !
This is one of those stories that tell you volumes of things without have sex. She thinking and he doing....
I think it was perfect as is. No need to call a name, he probably didn't even have any other thought beyond the orgasm in his head. I know that about half the time that is all I think about then!
great story! very well written, i loved it!
wow, this was great. Please keep writing
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Great 1st story!
Real good write as it is. As the guy was cumin, he should have cried out her name.
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Would of made better stort to call our her sister's name instead of her name !
A Solid story
This is one of those stories that tell you volumes of things without have sex. She thinking and he doing....
Well done
I think it was perfect as is. No need to call a name, he probably didn't even have any other thought beyond the orgasm in his head. I know that about half the time that is all I think about then!
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great story! very well written, i loved it!
great story
wow, this was great. Please keep writing
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