All Comments on 'Mom's Desert Photos'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Yeah

Amen to that!

ConnollyAssociationConnollyAssociationover 19 years ago
Go for it

Bring on the next part. Looking forward to a bit of fun in the sun.

cronas81cronas81over 19 years ago
Sounds Good so Far

Story sounds good so far just a word of caution. Speaking as an African American it seems the story could become pretty offensive if it turns into a "gang of black guys" deciding to rape the defenseless woman in the middle of the desert.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
KEEP GOING

love it so far, keep going and dont forget about the dogs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Pray continue

I would just have the mother and son wait it out so you can continue with the story. I don't like bestiality since it's offensive to me for the reason that dogs aren't aware of what they're being put to do.

Let the African-Americans go so you don't offend everyone here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep the story going

Keep the story going but dont involve the other guys or the animals. I would suggest that they wait it out, but do something while they do as Mum would be too scared to give away their position.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
hmmmm very good!!

please finish the story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great story

can not wait to read next part of it, idea is that the mom and son start walking through the desert. i would keep them away from the guys back at the car. also, make the mom more embarassed about her situation, liek her walking with hands over her body alot, makes it more real.

wizard17wizard17over 19 years ago
when comes part 2

i hope you will bring on the second part soon ; need to know the rest of the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
waiting....waiting...waiting..........

hey, its a real great story can be t5urned into a novel....please do it early....u can involve the black guys and the dog as welllll....then u can come up with many adventures with this mother and son.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
next part please good story so far

I like one of the others that left a comment,please don't have the blackguys force this mother or son into a gangbang.We have enough of this kind of things happening all to often. Be different. if we want to read interracial stories. the we should go to that site. As you probley can tell i am black and am tired of the BIG BAD BLACK GUYS. . that always rapes and cockolds the white guy. none of this please.

Curious_MarkCurious_Markover 11 years ago
Please dont and the story will be perfect

Plz dont make the black guys rape or cuckold the son. Its not appealing in the slightest and fucking annoying b. Im black my damn self and i hate those fucking stories. other than that i like the story. make it a little longer tho. i didnt bust a nut on the story yet ... im waiting

phtann3phtann3over 8 years ago
more

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Racist much?

TafiTafiover 5 years ago
Pls make a part 2 for mom's desert photo !! Or reply me and tell me whats going to happen

Please make a part 2 for mom's desert photo !!!please im begging you i really need to know whats going to happen or if you could reply me and just tell me a little part of what is going to happen ....if its a true story please😭😭im just begging ...i cant take the suspense anymore😭😭

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