All Comments on 'Provoking Change Ch. 01'

Interesting premise for a story. I thought at first that the grammar could be improved, but it adds authenticity to the character. Keep going, I can tell that the story will be interesting,

Love it so far, waiting for part 2 😊

Chironomid's comment is more-or-less exactly what I intended to say so I won't bother repeating other than to say this promises to be an intriguing series.

a good start to what I am sure is going to be a good series, just as long as nobody is forcing Zora into doing something she will regret later on, but still a good first story

I was bisexual but only hooking up with guys. I made friends with a woman from Iran named Shokofeh and she wore her Hijab and seemed so safe and innocent. But really, she was the biggest and best lesbian in town and she seduced me and taught me everything...

Shoko told me that lots of Muslm Women make their first sexual experiences with other Women coz to have sex with a man is too dangerous. Your own dad and brothers might kill that ass for family honor. So its just safer to Dyke out on the DL and be done. Plus Girls are more fun so wtf. Looking forward to next chapter. Khadija, Haditha... Just the names. Mmmmm....